Tuesday, September 2, 2008

Six Word Novel: part 2

Question: Which is better--

the original: "For sale: babies' shoes, never worn."

or: "For sale: babies' shoes, worn once."


Admiral Meriweather said...

One I came up with along with Samantha in the [short] tradition of the 6-word romance novel: "I complete you...not vice versa."

Samantha said...

In completing you, I empty myself.

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